Sunlight

I'm staring out my window...

Sunshine
pouring through
windows
slanting
as if searching
for
something
I've probably never
realized
exists

Reviews

[Tasha]

So simple, and yet, so intriguing.

[Dr. Wood ?]

out of the box and into the head

[Phillitup]

:) Thanks

[Tasha]

Wonderful imagination, and I like it on the left side. Nice write.

[Jocie]

its on the right, silly.

[Tasha]

haha whoops, I still like it.

[Jocie]

:) simple mistakes make me giggle *tehe*

[Tasha]

haha :)

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Tasha]

you're welcome

[Jocie]

:P

[Tasha]

:)

[Jocie]

blah!

[Tasha]

Haha

[Sourodip]

Nice imagination.....Nice poem....:)

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Savior of Time]

I enjoyed it. I can visualize the sunlight coming through my window in my "dull, grey, lifeless" room. :)

[Phillitup]

thanks

good reference!:)

[Savior of Time]

you're welcome, and thank you! :)

[angelface13]

Very interesting. I liked how you typed it to fit...but remember that if someone is simply telling the story out loud, the way it was typed, simply doesn't matter.

[Phillitup]

thanks...i'll keep that in mind charlei

[angelface13]

Always!

[angelface13]

My pleasure

[Jocie]

:) nice...I wish there was sun here at the moment.

[Phillitup]

In Florida, there's almost always sun....

[Jocie]

Yeah here in Maine, there might be a snow storm

[Phillitup]

:(

[Jocie]

I'm used to it.