Done

Done
with the lies
Through
with the questions
Tired
of the chases
Annoyed
by all the urgency
Done, through, tired, annoyed
with the life I am living

Reviews

[scripted]

this poem isnt like you at all... i like it! this piece is nicely penned, yours truely Danielle

[Phillitup]

There's a time for everything

[Personne]

I agree with this little poem. It all gets a little chaotic and unruly sometimes, but we eventually find our way back to harmony. Nice little poem(:

[Phillitup]

Thank you very much!

[Ashly Christen]

ah the chorus of life, this could very well suit it.

[Phillitup]

Thank you very much!

[Forever Hidden]

I can relate to this, and others can too.
Simple, but unique in it's own way :)
Emotion fills this write
Great Job!

[Phillitup]

Thank you very much!

[RavenWells]

Very nice job, I agree with the other reviewers that it brings a lot of emotions to the surface. :)

[Tasha]

Wow, so emotional with so few words. You are talented. Things will get better. Wonderful job as always Dell.

[Phillitup]

Thank you Tasha!

[Tasha]

You're welcome!

[SmileBig :)]

With so little words this is very emotional and very good....i think a lot of people can relate to this as well. Splendid job, my friend.

[Phillitup]

Thanks

[SmileBig :)]

No problem!