In a Flash

In a flash,
the dark is gone,
the light has come.
Don't give up.
It's right there.
Reach out,
feel the warmth of the light.
I'm here,
to help you as you struggle through the darkness.
In a flash,'
it will all change.

Reviews

[CecilA]

I love it; especially - the whole thing. Usually I find a line or two of a poem that really knocks me off my feet but this one - the whole poem is awesome. I really can feel the warmth of the light and feel confident in your promise to help. You are the bridge over the chasm between light and dark; good vs. evil; love vs. hate. Well done.

[Phillitup]

Thank you. I have recently had some trouble showing someone I care about that I will always be here for them. The tough part is that the person is AMAZING at acting so I don't really know if I have them convinced...:( I can only hope...

[Savior of Time]

Hmm, interesting concept, Dell. I really liked it. That light...reminds me of lightning.. Anyway, I liked it :)

-Willa

[Phillitup]

Thanks! I appreciate it! :3)

[Savior of Time]

Potato. Hi. You're welcome. Potato.

-Willa

[writingurl14]

wow this is a beautiful poem... I love it... it shows how darkness always goes away whether it be a dark time in you life or the darkness of night. it is so amazing I love it!

[Phillitup]

Thank you! I didn't really think about night time when writing this but you have a point! Thanks for showing that to me! :)

[writingurl14]

your welcome poems always have different meaning to different people... im just sharing my meaning of your poem to you...

[Phillitup]

:)

[Phillitup]

I appreciate it

[writingurl14]

:)