Listen

Listen,

can't you hear the bells? The raindrops?




flowing wind                            that whips through the air.
Whistling and howling. Eerily.

Stop your life for one second, and hear it.



                 It's calling you, the world.
Go answer it's request.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Lexi Villanueva]

Really good keep writing!-100

[Phillitup]

Thanks

[writingurl14]

this is really good! I really like it :) Good job!

[Phillitup]

thanks

[writingurl14]

yw :)

[Traci]

I found this to be well written and very thought provoking. We get so busy in our day to day lives we oftentimes fail to see, hear, feel the simplicity around us. If we would just slow down, be still, appreciate and learn...

[Phillitup]

thank you

[sonceotrok]

u r super too kid like me

[Phillitup]

thanks

[sonceotrok]

yo

[David Scott]

I see your listening well Dell!
Your a very fine poet and you have a creative mind. Thank you for sharing this idea today.

[Phillitup]

Thank you kindly for the review! I appreciate them :)

[Savior of Time]

The format is... different. I like it. I feel like it suits your poem well, even though it's "out of place" considering the other formats of other poems. Anyway, the poem itself is delightful. I enjoyed it. :)

-Willa

[Savior of Time]

By the way, I've listened. I've also heard the voices of the mountains..

[Phillitup]

Thank you Willa, :)

[Savior of Time]

You're welcome :D

-Willa