Mysteries Lives

kind of explains the wonders of life and the questions people have.

Life is a mysteries element. Understanding where it takes us into the future. Questions are being asked many times but some cannot be answered. It comes with obstacles. There’s car accidents, arguments, rainbows with possible pots of gold on the other end or even a possibility of having seven lives like a cat. The knowledge of knowing what may happen within an individual’s life; but these explanations may be left unknown. Does anyone have the contact information for the X-files? I didn’t think so but we can keep going until this mysteries future says no more. Than another obscurity comes upon us, where do we go after living? Is there even a place to go after death? One may never know but we all would like to seek answers before it’s too late.

Author's Note

I am really not certain if this apart of poetry so if anyone could help in this matter that would great! On the other hand, I do think I did ok on this piece but any comments will be helpful.

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

it seems you are new here..........WELCOME to this great community of writers.....
Having read your "about" section i will say, CONGRATULATIONS for considering writing as a hobby.........trust me, it is the best.
and i read that you want to improve your knowledge of the English language.......this is a great place for that too.........just try to read more, write more.......and also interact more.

Now, what you have written here is appreciable and quite good in thought and content.

However, there are, as you may be well aware of, a few mistakes. Some grammatical and some related to general information.
For example, in the very first line the word mysteries is a plural noun and you have used it to describe another noun, Life. Which is incorrect. it should be replaced with an adjective "mysterious". This can be termed as a grammatical mistake. I am no a big authority on grammar, in fact i myself struggle with it, quite a bit. So i will not elaborate more.

Then in the seventh line, you have written about a cat having seven lives.........now this is a general information based mistake........proverbially, a cat is said to have nine lives. Now these types of mistakes can be rectified by reading on various subjects and googling when having doubts.

This is indeed a great beginning. No one can take that away from you. So do not be disheartened and write more.
Please do not take my comments personally or as a final word of judgement..........these are in all it's entirety, purely my personal opinion and nothing more than that.
I apologize if this review offends you or discourages you, i do not intend to do so.

Well wishes.
Happy writing!!!