I can't spell Haiku

I think this is a Haiku

I ate a KFC biscuit

With eighteen pads of butter

I love eating danger

Author's Note

I know it's silly. I'm trying to write Haiku's and I'm not sure I know how

Reviews

[Marie]

This has a good thought to it, but is ot a haiku, which has five syllable in the first line, seven in the secnd, and five in the last. This would be more like it:

I ate a biscuit
With eighteen pads of butter
I love eating death

[Baby Ricochet]

AH! Thanx.

[Marie]

I was looking at a list of magazines and came across one which was looking for all types of kaikus--except the 5-7-5 form. I didn't think there were that many other forms.

[Baby Ricochet]

Something about Haikus throws me

[Marie]

It's because that's not your thing. Rap is your thing.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's true