Nothing

Words about nothing

Written by no one

No one will read

 

Photos of nothing

Taken by no one

No one will see

 

Music for nothing

Composed by no one

No one will hear

 

Roads that go nowhere 

Through valleys of nothing

driven by no one

 

No darkness

No light

No joy

No sorrow

No pity

No laughter

No heartache

No memories

 

Just nothing

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

At the risk of sounding contrary, this is really something. The depth you've created with these seemingly simple words is astounding. Leaps and bounds, Baby...you never cease to amaze.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for reviewing Nothing Kimmer.

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

I truly enjoyed it :)
this poem is really relative to my 'world', a place with complete nothingness and pure silence. I really enjoy your poetry B.R, I hope to read more :)
thanks for sharing.
100/100

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for reviewing nothing Roxast.If you have a penchant for Extistential gloom you may want to check out the book Nausea by Jean Paul Sarte. He was one of the hot shot french extisentialist philosophers that followed in the wake of France's occupation by the Nazis. If you're not suicidal before reading it you will be afterwards.

[∠( ᐛ 」∠)＿]

I'll read it right away :D

[Tai Ryens]

I haven't a word of critique nor criticism to speak, just agreement. Well done.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you

[Lunette Lariz]

And because of that, I have nothing to say but great! :) I like how you compose your poems. They just have that unique effect on me. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you

[Pax]

a perfect nothing... deeply profound out of nothingness...
Great work my friend!

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you mr pax

[Jordan's Back]

This is a review by no one about nothing. This is very deep and intriguing. and a Wonderful write.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you

[Michael G.]

No real review... just shaking my head "yes."
Well done, BR, well done.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you

[.]

This is awesome. I love the repetition of "no" towards the end of your poem, it really give the tone of your poem an impact. Great job.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you

[That_Girl]

Huh... Interesting. I like seeing these different aspects of your writing. Nice.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you

[Baby Ricochet]

It's been a weird few days

[That_Girl]

S**t happens. Hope everything is alright though. :)

[Ees]

woah,
this is different for you.
Very empty and full of nothing. I am not sure what to think of it, perhaps nothing.
Nice work.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you