Senryu for Summer
A Poem by
Baby Ricochet
There's a photo of Summer in my photos if you're at all curious
Beautiful glowing skin
The scent of almonds and girl
her orchid garden blooms
© 2012 Baby Ricochet
Reviews
Miss that feeling.
Posted 13 Years Ago
13 Years Ago
Summer was a fine young lady
How sweet, great imagery
Posted 13 Years Ago
How sweet, great imagery
Now this is a beauty! Lovely work :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Now this is a beauty! Lovely work :)
your mind is in the gutter, richochet! lol, I'm kidding. Another great write.
Posted 13 Years Ago
your mind is in the gutter, richochet! lol, I'm kidding. Another great write.
13 Years Ago
Oh it is. Thank you for the review
Is that last line a bit... dirty? Just what I think it means but maybe I'm wrong. Still, I like this a lot. Sweet, fresh, warm.... nice!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Is that last line a bit... dirty? Just what I think it means but maybe I'm wrong. Still, I like this a lot. Sweet, fresh, warm.... nice!
13 Years Ago
Yes it is. Thank you for the review Avy.
Might I ask why the sudden explosion of Haikus are written about?
On topic; well, not sure I understand this all too well. Sounds nice though.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Might I ask why the sudden explosion of Haikus are written about?
On topic; well, not sure I understand this all too well. Sounds nice though.
13 Years Ago
Summer was a girl I had some "rendezvous " with.
She used almond butter soap that I could sme.. read more Summer was a girl I had some "rendezvous " with.
She used almond butter soap that I could smell the on her
The last line is a reference to summer having an orgasm
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13 Years Ago
My computer crashed so I'm posting on my phone so you im working short
13 Years Ago
Ah, I understand now.
nice poem, haiku.
Posted 13 Years Ago
nice poem, haiku.
Beautiful work, my dear friend :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Beautiful work, my dear friend :)
13 Years Ago
Thank you cord
Love, love this one, it's sensual and elegant. Really beautiful Baby and gratifying.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Love, love this one, it's sensual and elegant. Really beautiful Baby and gratifying.
simple and exquisite in perfect tandem!
Posted 13 Years Ago
simple and exquisite in perfect tandem!
13 Years Ago
Thank you so much.
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Baby Ricochet Tampa, FL
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