Bats

I pulled her pants off

Bats flew out her haunted chooch

The Moon drifted

Reviews

[Mia]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

[Christoph Poe]

So simple, yet well done. Haha, thanks for the laugh!

[Tai Ryens]

I've seen this performed many times in poetry . . . Nonetheless, well done

[Mary]

hahahahaaaaaaaa!!!!! Just the bellylaugh I needed tonite! thanks!

[Baby Ricochet]

You're welcome

[Annabelle Lee]

haha. rusty hinges, too?

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Hahahahhahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Call the ghostbusters :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha!

[Frieda P]

LOL

[Ruth]

Ohhh....is it wrong to say I loved this lol :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha! Thank you

[CS]

Seems pretty unsanitary...

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure

[Kaylor Mason]

Now that's called disturbing . . . on so many levels. Even Dracula would have turned and run screaming . . .

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Hahaaa!
~pat

[Baby Ricochet]

Glad you liked it