Lover's Touch Senryu

Her lover's touch

Gently caresses her soul

She glows warm inside

Author's Note

Working short is helping me express beauty. Maybe I'll stop being such a hard ass in the real world.

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

I'll be honest, I can't exactly imagine you as the inner teddy bear type, but hey what do i know??? :D however, I thought the poem was really pretty.

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha! That's funny. Thank you for the review

[RachelReaper]

no prob

[Kaylor Mason]

Well, you never know--it might help [in response to your author's note]

[Baby Ricochet]

Maybe. Thank you

[DIVYA]

Wow! every woman's dream haiku! Loved it Baby! Keep writing and sharing!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Stonz P.]

Woah, it kinda states everything a woman must feel.
Good work.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

Even though poetry is magical, you're gonna need more than a poem to un-badass you Baby. ;-) Nice write....

[Baby Ricochet]

Probably. Thank you

[Marie]

This is very nice. THis poetry form is having a good effect on you.

[Baby Ricochet]

I think so.

[Annabelle Lee]

I love the old stuff! But this new side of you is pretty interesting

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you