Away from home away from her

Sweet distant voices from home

Across the silver ribbon moon light miles

My heart and soul are breaking

Reviews

[The Refined Poet]

wow. It almost made sad...lol... nicely done. beautiful sadness for sure...

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Mr Poet

[Destinyxi]

instead of short and sweet it's short and sad. nicely done.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[DrD]

You know, you're right. Your expressive quality is vastly improved using this style. Keep it up because I'm enjoying it very much.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks doc

[That_Girl]

Love the second line!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[KAOlmsted]

Well now you're just showing off ;-) This is so amazingly beautiful and romantic, Baby...it's like your whole heart, right there on your sleeve...Exquisite pain.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Seamstress]

Simply beautiful. Tis so like how I feel about the man who fills my heart.

[Baby Ricochet]

Tha

[Baby Ricochet]

I feel you lady. Thank you for the review

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Raw and pure. Excellent. Another favorite.
~pat

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Annabelle Lee]

ohhhh..... ricochet, i almost broke. great write

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

Bittersweet, this one. Love 'across the silver ribbon light miles'!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Larry Dyson]

Maya is all it is!

[Baby Ricochet]

All is illusion.