Morning kisses

Sweet playful kisses
On my sleepy morning face
She wakes up the sun

Reviews

[Michael G.]

(Smiling) Well written, sir. Well done. I'll go along with Marie. Last line is "class."

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Mr G

[Marie]

Good syllable count...nice last line, about "waking up the sun..."

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you marie

[Annabelle Lee]

sweet

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[DIVYA]

Very nice way to start the day!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[kelvin]

very nice way to start a day here. as always keep writing fellow writer

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you. You too

[Frieda P]

What's happening to you Baby, it's like you fell into a vat of dreamy pudding....I like
;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

I have a romantic side. Thank you

[RachelReaper]

AW!!!!!!!!!

[Baby Ricochet]

Hmmmmmmm

[Seamstress]

So cute. This is another great one from you that is sweet and romantic at the same time.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[DrD]

A very pleasant writing to begin the day.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[paparapapa]

It's truly one of the greatest feelings - having to wake up with your loved one beside you. And that last line? It did it. Great job! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you