Afghanistan Senryu

A Poem by Baby Ricochet

My a*s is freezing
I've not had a dump in days
God I hate this place

© 2012 Baby Ricochet

Author's Note

Baby Ricochet

Seriously, Afghanistan sucked.

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It must have been bad.

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

It sucked. Thank you for the review

Mastered the haiku
Made it somewhat interesting
Ricochet is king

Haha. It's contagious. But, on a more serious note, I'd just like to thqnk you for serving in the military. I don't think you guys hear that as often as you should.

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Thank you

Just to start the New Year off with a bang...!

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Damn straight

13 Years Ago

;-)

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Added on December 30, 2012
Last Updated on December 30, 2012

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Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL

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I write just for the hell of it A way to spend some time Blurting out in cyber space Whatever's on my mind Maybe funny maybe tragic Emotional and raw Politi.. more..