Villain Senryu

A gift I gave to some one on the WC. Ain't I just the nicest guy though

You want a villain
well now you have a good one
So have fun with that

Reviews

[anxia]

nice.

[Salar Majak]

to be a villain you have to have a reason, go kick some butts villian!!

[Ees]

Without villains there would be no heros. The world needs them.
Nicely done.

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Yup ;-)
~pat

[Pete Langley]

You wear villainy well, Mark, but just remember many poets can`t handle conflict. P.

[Richard Man]

Sticks and stones and words just bounce off you..... stones are good to make roads.... sticks make good fires... a fine words .... make good poems, books and .....

[Monster ^.^]

I feel like I've been out for a long time (true) so I don't know what's happening. But then, I hope it reaches those who you meant this for

[Will]

I like the tone, but the "so" at the start of both lines is kind of awkward. I liked it, but this would be very good if that was altered somehow. But solid tone, and great message. Stick it to 'em, bro!

[Ohhhwillow]

The repetition of "so", I was unsure of, however, this proudly represents the side of each of us that craves danger.. That seeks excitement through menace. Nice Baby

[Brandon S. Whitten]

He is a nuisance. Take care of him will you:) Good one, BR