Praying she's eighteen Senryu

Oh Pretty baby
Tell me you're over eighteen
It's so f*****g cruel

Reviews

[Seamstress]

*shakes my head and smiles*

[Baby Ricochet]

;).......................

[Blue Ivory]

Haha! Did not expect this :P Clever poetry!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Siren

[unsavable_soul]

Given the context of the picture,
nice write. I think it's something every straight guy goes through. Not to mention girls have come to look a lot more like women than they used to.
Chris
100/100

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you unsavable soul

[unsavable_soul]

No problem.
Chris

[Ryan]

she's gonna tell you she's over eighteen. it'll still be cruel if she's not.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure

[Brett Moore]

You seriously can't tell any more. It's unnerving.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure

[Tai Ryens]

Don't go to prison now!

[Baby Ricochet]

I'll stay away

[Jack...]

She said she was over 18, she was still in the eighth grade because she was stupid. Brains don't matter to me.

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Good one!

[nigrum homonculus]

this physically hurt me to look at that knowing if i was to give her the full length of the shlong, i'd do the full length of a sentence :(. funny write man.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks PhilGod. It's great to see you bro. You've been a stranger far to long.

[TL Boehm]

So funny! And you're probably looking at jail time should you choose to step out from the confines of this senryu

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure.

[Marie]

Naturally she's gong to tell you she's over eighteen. You're the one who has to decide.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's true.