Some day senryu

One day

There may come a day
I can wash the blood away
But I don't know when

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Deep writing. I cant write freakin' senryu. My brain cant get it in gear in only three lines.

[s y e]

It's a new year Baby - maybe this will be the year? Determination in this is always good too.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Noodle

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Very strong and determined write, a declaration well put and without a time frame. It speaks briefly of release from a past which hopefully brings inner peace.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you cynthia

[Leigh]

I hope it comes soon for you, you are doing good with your poetry, it is a very good thing

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you leigh

[ChikHaley64]

A new year means new possibilities and a new journey to travel. 2013 is behind you. 2014 has new things in store! Take the chance to leave things behind. The past is in the past, yes it may still hurt, but it has gone and passed.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you haley

[Cassie]

That day will come soon and good news is, 2014 is just across the corner and maybe that is your year. Peace to you and happy new year my friend

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Cassie

[Nia Hope]

We've all got some kind of blood on our hands whether it be our own or someone else's but for you I think that day is coming soon. Amazing poem keep up the good work :)

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Ankara

[icelandicblue]

I hope so BR you certainly deserve some peace. Happy New Year, I hope this is the one for you to find that serenity.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Blue. Happy new year

[Joyce S. Greene]

Hopefully your poetry provides the medium for catharsis that you need to get rid of that "blood," BR. This is a very good Japanese short form poem.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Joyce

[Latifa]

I hope it will be soon for you friend

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Latifa