Perfect day: A senryu

One of the things I love about My side of Florida

The fish are biting 

Got some shiners for snook bait 

Beer in the cooler 

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

You have painted a portrait of a fisherman's dream day - no fish for me, thanks, but I will take one of those beers... ;)

[Baby Ricochet]

Of course. You can sit with Marie in the bow under her Parasol

[Lydia Shutter]

Sounds like every fisherman's Utopia! Very nice scene set with just three short lines. Well written senyru. Lydi**

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Lydi

[Frieda P]

You forgot salami sandwiches at 5 AM...I prefer crabbing but sounds like a good day to me Baby.

[Baby Ricochet]

Ooh I want one

[jacob erin-cilberto]

can't be anything more perfect!

love to fish....

[Baby Ricochet]

I can't either

[MsJewel]

Sounds like a beautiful day BR! Enjoy!

:) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Oh those days are

[Marie]

Sounds like a perfect day to me. Except for the beer and the fish.

[Baby Ricochet]

You can sit in the bow of the boat holding a parasol.

[Ruth]

If a favourite thing to do then that would be heaven....a joyous moment and "me" time...out in the world for a few....and beer has to be chilled ;) lol

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure. Thank you Ruth

[Draven]

My kind of day is a sword in my hand, a warm sun on my face, and 20 of my close friends to clash blades with, as we have done for 8 years now. Good poem, Sir.

[Baby Ricochet]

That sounds fun,

[Troy Henson]

Now that's my kind of day out...when do we leave

[Baby Ricochet]

As soon as my buddy picks us up

[N!LoC]

and thats your perfect day??? ????? ... sigh... i wish i was you.....

[Baby Ricochet]

But then you wouldn't be you and no one can take your place