Time

The Thing that Existed Since Forever

time should stop sometime
It is as great as a summer's day
Time as such a thing not known
It is frozen as we do not know
the prolonged unfulfilled desire
For such a long time
i am longing for summer
the freedom it sets me
the will able to fulfill
Although for a short time,
it is a pleasing time
Time doesn't exist
We are able to shake off time
The ability to look at the world
Look at life
The amazing values and things here
it has great value for everyone
Time is wellspent...

Reviews

[Lorraine]

I really think that this is an interesting poem. I like how it seems continuous and never-ending because of the uncapitalized first word and the elipses at the end.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Levioshock]

good job