Tell me

Posted at the suggestion of a very very good friend.

 

Tell me you love me, don't let me forget it

I need to hear it,

I want to feel it,

I want to feel you.

 

Tell me you need me, don't let me doubt it,

Hold me

Kiss me,

Smile for me..

 

I'll tell you I love you, you'll never forget it,

Hear me

Feel it

Feel me.

 

I'll tell you I need you, don't ever doubt it

I'll hold you,

I'll kiss you,

You're the reason I smile...
 

Reviews

[Looouise]

Very cute.
:]
I liked how the first two stanzas were aimed at your needs as such
and then the last two stanzas were aimed at "___".
Very nice.

[Starting Over]

I love this!

[BeautifulDisaster]

good write.
I like it, it was a nice and relaxing poem.
I can tell that you really like this girl.
Good job. :D

[revenant21]

Very good, i loved it all the way!