You

Written about the girl of my dreams...

My heart is pounding harder and harder in my chest, all because you're looking at me.  You smile, and my whole body goes weak.  I want so badly to hold you, to call you mine.  Can you see how much I need you?  Do I really make you happy?  I hope so.  That's all I ever wanted.  I want you to be happy, I want you to smile, I want you to dream, I want you.  That's all there is to it.  I'm not sure I can have you, but I can dream, right?

 

I go to sleep every night, dreaming of you.  Because at least when I dream of you, I'm happy.

 

You make me smile, and I can finally breathe.  Do you see how happy you've made me?  I can smile again.  For once, I feel truly alive.

 

I love you.

 

Do you love me?

Author's Note

Very rough in my eyes, but this is what was on my mind.

Reviews

[RainyDay]

Hmmm...the fact that every review is from a girl who no doubt feels this way about you, or at least something like it, kind of takes away from their words of praise. I hate to be the party-pooper at the fan club you've got going on here, love, but the poem is crap, and "rough" is a nice word for it. People think that you write down how you feel and it's a poem. How many times must I say it?? A poem has to mean something. It is art. It is work and perfection and flowing and uncovering feelings in others. THIS is not a poem. It is a paragraph about high-school lust. And even as that it is not even remotely powerful. If you are not as repulsively self-obsessed as your writing and your picture suggest, send me a message and tell me to get lost. Othere than that- learn to write.

[LostinKristina]

I really just want all of this gone

[LostinKristina]

honestly I just wish you would take down any writing that had to do with me.

[Faith]

I love this! it was cute!!

:D

Faith

[playful>Julie xD]

Um yea it was good....

[It'sLexiB47]

wow
this is great
its so emotional and heart-felt
i wish i could write as well as you
awesome :)
-alexis

[Chelsea (Jade)]

Awww, very sweet write Bry.

[Starting Over]

Awww B she must love you! Who is this about? I love you!

[Taylor H]

is this for someone i know?