Binding Me Whole

Smiles,

they were the stitches

pinned to my heart.

Kind eyes,

they were the hot chocolate

that slipped down my throat.

Tender embraces,

they were the spine

that kept me upright.

Timid whispers,

they were the breaths

that were taken away.

Honest words,

they were the construction workers

that created my soul,

binding me,

to hold me

whole.

Reviews

[Emrick]

I like the idea.i havent seen such.its very unique and nice.

[demureminds]

Thank you (:

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

So amazing and beautiful, I like it :D
Rating 100/100

[demureminds]

Aw thanks! (:

[....]

beautiful written write, so nicely done

[demureminds]

Thanks for your kind reviews Poetry Luv! (:

[Tai Ryens]

I admire every word in this piece, and my favorite stanza is the first one. That was brilliant. Clever job, I love this.

[demureminds]

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

[Colleen a Bean]

wow I love this It flows together beautifully and I can relate to it amazing job I can not wait to read more lol

[demureminds]

Thanks, glad you can relate! (:

[Colleen a Bean]

welcome :)