Hello, Is The World Asleep?

Hello, hellos in the background tension,

on the other side 

of a cut telephone line,

I speak out.

But the world still sleeps,

heaving the earth

in rhythmic snores

around the world.

It pulsates, 

beating thumps and bumps

musically dancing with cosmic

dust.

Waning hours ahead of me,

I’m still the only one not sleeping,

My wondrous soul clasps my body,

pleating the seams 

deep 

into insomnia,

my crania,

still ponderous. 

Inhales of clean air,

no morning breath seared,

because the whole world

snores,

ignores,

when I speak.

Reviews

[HopelessRomantic]

This is really great, a cry for help yet staying subtle very well done

[demureminds]

Yepp you got it. And thanks for the reviews!

[HopelessRomantic]

no problem

[Serenity Faith]

I happy to be wide awake and am listening intently to your words ^_~ Very nicely written. I feel that way too sometimes.

[demureminds]

Thank you!

[zainul]

I had similar experience recently.
Not pleasing for anyone.
Wonderful write.

[demureminds]

Thanks!

[zainul]

Welcome!

[Tai Ryens]

Ah, I enjoyed the vibe I got from this and it flows well. Good job!

[demureminds]

Thank you!