Speaking In Petals

I.

Peony petals slip

with ease 

stumbling down 

in rhythm with the breeze,

breathing 

into youthful lungs

of frolicking adolescents.

II.

Eglantine roses

rise in the eyes

of desolate

juvenile nativity,

pumping in 

healing antidotes

of scraped up hearts.

III.

Red tulips

ablaze in passion of 

witty pubescent lovers

in the midst of

dim lunar 

skies,

fiery chasms

in the brink of 

arousing spasms.

IV

Honeysuckle 

remedies

in fruition grassy fields 

at ripened maturity,

simmering

in temperate 

summers of adoration,

in bask of solace 

before fate

arrives

with a basket of

Hydrangea 

blues.

Reviews

[bluntdude]

Ok ok, that was good! Are you taking a botany class? I only know a few flowers, so...ha. Keep writing for sure.

[demureminds]

Thanks haha and no I'm not taking botany class, I just know a few flowers haha.

[Xardalas]

It's truly beautiful. I enjoyed reading it and it brought up a few pleasant memories as well. It's well written and I believe that it flowed together perfectly.

[demureminds]

thank you (:

[Antonio Valentino]

okay thats it... snap!... that was the sound of me breaking my pencil, i give up.. your talent has rendered me fruitless.. :)

i keep thinking that each of poem of your's is, the best, but basically they are in a class by themselves..

i look forward to each and every one of them.. i dont want to read them all at once though.. they are to be sipped and savored, slowly and longinly..

congratulations on your top writer badge as well.. you totally deserve it and much more

simply glorious!
:)

[demureminds]

Aw thanks for the kind reviews!

[Antonio Valentino]

you're very welcome :)