I Love You

I love you

I love you

I love you

I love you

I love you

…

a million times 

through infinity,

the way you shy

away your enduring stare

enveloping me 

in you,

the scent of your hair

navigating through

our memories to times 

when days were finite,

and our lives

a concoction

of scrambled puzzle

pieces,

each fragment unfitting,

until I met your hands,

and they dovetailed

to mine,

but anyone can say

I love you.

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

This is awesome...one of your best :)

[demureminds]

Thank you (:

[kublakhan27]

No problem :)

[Tai Ryens]

Perfectly written, flawless job~

[demureminds]

Thank you (:

[Antonio Valentino]

i hope i get one of the first copies of your first poetry book..

it would find a special place on the shelf of my essence

this one has a feel of unbridled giddiness..

your hand is a master sculptor of spark and emotion..

:)

[demureminds]

Haha thanks, it turned out a bit different from what I first imagined (: