Noose of Night

The noose of night

absorbed my skin

in tight enveloped haste,

it graced the glaze

of abysmal vacancy,

insomnia’s heed

for me.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

You've captured perfectly the insomniac's emotions as he lays awake at night. Well done.

[demureminds]

Thanks, fun fact, oddly enough I wrote this in the day haha.

[Antonio Valentino]

The noose of night
absorbed my skin
in tight enveloped haste,

that is an amazing verse.. i want it haha..

as it melded perfectly with the other lines waiting below..

you write special i hope you know..

:)

[demureminds]

Thank you as always (:

[Antonio Valentino]

:)