A Memory Lost

your taste lingers.

fog stretched out like veins

enveloped me like a thick blanket

where i wanted to find comfort

to disappear

an illustrious lover.

a hopeful forever fairytale

all-consuming

not wanting to forget

a period of peace

a place with sunlight

now dark.

forever lost

Author's Note

first poem I put on this site! excited to put up the first chapter of my novel! hope you liked this!

Reviews

[CD Campbell]

Heartfelt work Denise. Imagery was great. Look forward to reading more. CD

[denise]

Thanks so much! I truly appreciate you taking the time to read my work! i will return the favor! ;)

[Jennifer Shaw]

Such beautiful sadness in your words. I felt a soft pain as I read them. I really appreciate you for sharing this.

[denise]

Thanks again, Jennifer! Your reviews are so honest and helpful!

[h d e rushin]

I like it a lot Denise. dana

[denise]

Thanks so much, Dana! I was so nervous of what the feedback would be- for any of my writing! I love how helpful and polite everyone has been thus far! I respect all of the writers on this site and take your opinions to heart! I hope you will be able to read some more of my work soon. I will gladly return the favor. Thanks again!

[h d e rushin]

no need being nervous Denise. There are good and honest people here......love, dana

[denise]

Thank you! ;)