celluloid (song lyrics)

This song is kinda... overly cliche upon looking back at it but this is the kind of stuff I wrote when I was 18. It's just a part of who I was.

Revised from the original posted on WritersCafe.org on April 9th, 2007.

 

Celluloid

 

[intro]

please mark this scene

as the climax to our film

and i'll try to pick it up from here

just let us, steal

this scene

 

[v1]

i'd be happy to

turn these pages

and see my ending, develop

on the celluloid

 

[v2]

edit out this scene

dim the lights

queue music

slow transition

find my new disposition

and a different motivation

for you (x3)

 

[v3]

please mark this scene

as the climax to our film

and i'll try to pick it up from here

 

 

[chorus]

i'd be happy to add a few lines

... of my own

and take the directors chair

tell myself to stop

six scenes ago

 

 

[possible chorus]

queue the music please

taking back everything

improvise this scene