Where the Angels Fall

I am fading,

Ain't no one at the door

Nobody to take me in

No one to trust with my heart

And they stand around me

Looking but seeing through me

I am no one, just a ghost

A lonely girl that roams the halls

Found me in the dumps

Alone counting the days

Bleeding and pleading

To my heart to stop beating

Don't help me get up

I'm enveloped in my own prison

With bars arraying my mouth

And a whipping post at my heart

Never knew what's the light

Maybe that's why we all fight

Just to feel that we're alive

To hope someday to be alright

To feel the pain, to find the sign

To the luminous speak of a soul

Delved into the twisted branches

In a forest of black thorns

But I lost it all

I lost it all

Lost my balance 

on a tight rope

Feel me fall

Hear me echo

I'm an empty bottle

Forged of ego

Got up to find 

A wreck called home

And that's where they

Told me the angels fall

Hold the savior

Just a little sting

Just a slim slash

On each wrist

I count my sins

And fall...

Reviews

[uNmAsKeD-dEluSiOns]

I love your writing because your really not afraid to hold back, and the emotion just pours through so easily, and flows so nicely. I can feel the pain, sadness, and that feeling of being completely alone. You really described it effortlessly it seems.

[S.F]

Thank you so much! I am more than glad you enjoyed it!

[Jonas]

So deep, I see Adele rolling in it.
Congratulations on making something that is so amazing I must write on it.
Better than me, kudos to you.

[S.F]

Thank you Jonas for your kind words. They are truly appreciated!

[Jonas]

Reach for the stars!

[raj24]

Hi, just loved this....liked the way you have portrayed the pain of the girl....and it also showed the anger and frustration of the person...Where the Angels Fall..sorry don't know how this rating thing works but I enjoyed reading it..:)..

[S.F]

Raj, thank you so much for this review. I am glad you enjoyed it.

[raj24]

hey hi, i was just going through your other works..i liked that Lotus one too...quite soft..n nicely written..Riders of fire is again about these emotions...i liked the way you have tried to show the anger of people against the society..especially that line.." Beasts of fire, riders of glory
Their watching crowd shall write their story
For warriors set out to make history
While cowards stay back and write their mystery"..

[S.F]

Why, thank you! I have come across your work too. I liked 'Tears'. It embodies the pain,the longing and the anger of losing a loved one. It also outlines the unfairness of ones thoughts when unbalanced by such overwhelming emotion. Great job!

[raj24]

Thanks...i like writing on such subjects...things that are closer to human emotions..:).. your works have lot more passion and that's what draws the reader towards them..keep up the good work..:)

[S.F]

I will, and again thank you :)