Leaving him in the past

One last poem

Leaving you was the best decision ever ever since we met on here im finally free not lusted like u treated me u made me feel like jo dime of worthless seeing the false of purity seeing no chance finally letting you go I haven't I forgot you john. One last time before I go hope u never see me ever agian nor talk because im already gone like a flower breaking through the horizon of pure joy. I still
have the poem u wrote but not impressed maybe u wrote that to others too so not a special place to see.

Reviews

[poetic swan]

Very honest expression of hurt and freedom, showing the strength it takes to walk away.

[Lorry]

Meeting online is always risky because no one ever lists their flaws as honestly as they'd expect from others. We select our greatest hits and achievements to dazzle at best but more than likely it is just an exaggerated cv of what we think people want to hear.
Only after the event of being taken in by someone do we learn a harsh lesson and that lesson is often repeated until we give up at the thought or just get cynical and go all retro and plunge into real live action dating... perish the thought! 😀

[Michael Sun Bear]

Hello Destiny, I read your poem which made me very curious of your age so I turned to your profile and saw you are 18 (could be a little older now). We all need to be loved; we all need someone to allow us to give love. In my young years I was desperate for such, and more than once made a fool of myself and allowed myself to feel heartbroken. I wish you the best now and in the future dealing with the pain of love gone awry. Michael

[Relic]

Online relationships never really go well if they're on a writing site like this one. You're better off staying away from those.

[Twilight]

At least, it sounds as if you have broken free from him; and moved on to a brighter place in life.

So, now you can return to being a free spirit; focusing upon athletics and other activities which matter to you.

Indeed, sometimes it's better not to take on board; too much at once in life. And, compartmentalise those aspects of life; which may seem less important to you.