Unfound

Look into my eyes
As you see darkness
Look into my soul
As you see nothing lies
Look into my heart
With all the broken pieces
I buried them in a hole
So no one could know
Most likely you won't find
What I hid behind
My broken heart

Reviews

[micky]

Your best piece so far! I love this one well done;)

[Devilkid]

thank you lots of ppl say it's deep

[Bhumika Devkota]

Great job! I love the form of it.

[Devilkid]

thank you i just started with poetry

[Vito]

This strikes chords with me for sure! I love it

[Devilkid]

thanks lol :)

[yuki]

is this haiku? :D nicely done :D

[Devilkid]

lol idk not rlly but thanks :)

[yuki]

your welcome :)