Returning

Another haiku

Peacefully cruising

Still miles from a hostile home

Will they remember?

Reviews

[JenLyn]

Love it.

[Millionth Muse]

Nicely done...you've nailed the format, and the last line is a perfect "tag". I think this is more of a "senryu" (deals with human emotions rather than haiku which deals with nature), but none the less a very nice write. I love the emotion mixed with the imagery.

[deeps]

Deep and powerful with straight forward feelings here. Quite the enjoyable read and wonderful Haiku.