Good Days

Good Days

A Poem by Emily

Today I feel
Effervescent,
Feminine,
And beautiful.

My confidence blooms with rainbow colors,
Each bubble a perfect sphere of hope.
As they pop I rejoice,
Frolicking in the spray.
Today is an utopian day.

Without a doubt Eve is within me,
A small part of her ether resides in my blood.
I am graced with this form, and I love
 Every rolling hill and sparkling lake.
Parts of girlhood scatter like diamonds
Today I find just enough for a ring.

The classics are awed by me.
I can be painted and sculpted,
But they can't get enough of me.
I have collected all their works inspired by me,
And I'm still compelled to take 5 more selfies.
Like Snow White and Aurora,
Princes live to kiss me.

Today I feel
Effervescent,
Feminine,
And beautiful.
Today I am me.

© 2015 Emily


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My confidence blooms with rainbow colors,
Each bubble a perfect sphere of hope.
As they pop I rejoice,
Frolicking in the spray.
Today is an utopian day.

these lines are the most emotional,really touching.i really like it

Posted 10 Years Ago


Emily

10 Years Ago

Thank you Usman!
Awesome wording in this write. Expressing emotions perfectly and descriptively with good flow :) Good work Emily :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Emily

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Aaron!
Today you are beautiful Emily! A celebration of all that's good to life and a tribute to your femininity you have collected the feelings of a beautiful morning and strung them together in this happy but poignant poem, very well written my friend ^_^

Posted 10 Years Ago


Emily

10 Years Ago

Thank you Richard! Very insightful.
Loved the way you wrote it,

My confidence blooms with rainbow colors,
Each bubble a perfect sphere of hope.
As they pop I rejoice,
Frolicking in the spray.
Today is an utopian day.

Nice wording.

armin. ..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Emily

10 Years Ago

Thank you Armin!

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Hey, I'm Emily. I go to Los Angeles Valley College, and I write poetry and some short stories. In my free time, I draw, play video games, and play with my dogs Zeke and Roscoe. Zeke is a Great Dane/Bo.. more..