Summer

Well,just about all the things I like about summer.

Oh, how joyous the sun
Freed from a cloudy day
Caressing my soul

Soft steps and deep waves
Cold to the bone
It feels so good
Rush,rush
Powerful peace

Lounging in a familiar place
Although it's not "home"
A beautiful place to be
In body and in heart

3 months or 4
All we need
Is a Summer

Reviews

[Laughing-Bear]

I pondered this poem for two days. To my way of thinking this poem speaks of serenity of inner being. I likened “Freed from a cloudy day” to the release of shackles on ones pneuma. Your line “caressing my soul” paints a beautiful word picture of a gentle and lovingly sensation that is breathed and blown.
The placement of this vital spirits promenade on a beach in sand and surf is perfect; it whispers peace while speaking volumes. I loved the line “Lounging in a familiar place”, It points to a wise creation that has the understanding that we need to have that secret, special place to rejuvenate our being. A very powerful and moving poem, thank you!

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[An owl on the moon]

How i love the thoughts of summer your writing brings to life. This is gentle and warming... lifting one from the cold that has covered the world for months now... I'm ready...