The Sea and I

My first poem!

Loud, thunderous booms
Soft, gentle waves
 
The sea, I feel, is inside of me.
What wonders of the unknown depths,   
What beauty of the reef lie within me.

My soul is as mysterious as the sea.

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you capture so much of the human soul with so few lines~ the comparison is not only poetic but so very true~ our tides correspond to the sea as she is pulled along by the moon~ beautiful and tranquil presentation~

[Mazery]

With so few words, you describe something as expansive as the ocean. Your word usage is indeed wonderful and I can imagine that you have some deep connection with the water