Six word story

My first kiss. My first love.

Reviews

[Leon C]

very clever how you use just 6 words to tell this story. There is a lot of space between the words for the reader to fill and this makes the story more personal for each reader.

Well done

[Amy R]

wow so much feelings can be put into those 6 words.
simple but have meaning!
thank you for sharing :)

[KittyKatgirl]

Thank you :)

[Roxie M]

Yep! Awww, how sweet, and it is truly a story, the only shorter one I know is "He wept."

[KittyKatgirl]

Thank you for reading this and reviewing it :)

[jeannemarie coulter]

well penned simplicity...very fine, very short word tapestry speaking volumes...

[KittyKatgirl]

Thank you :)

[Writergirl]

So many emotions stirred with just six words. Very nice :)

[KittyKatgirl]

Thank you :)

[A Lonely Girl]

6 word stories are hard because you have only a few words to describe a whole concept. Well done! It made me think about my first kiss and brought back many memories :)

[KittyKatgirl]

Haha yeah. Unfortunately mine was horrible. Lol :)

[KittyKatgirl]

Thank you for revewing it

[A Lonely Girl]

It was not horrible! And thank you for reviewing mine! I will review more of yours when I have the time to sit down and read a long story :)

[KittyKatgirl]

Haha thanks. I meant my first kiss was horrible lol

[Not here]

nice :) i like that. talk about a short story

[KittyKatgirl]

Yep also made for a 6 word contest