Black

lover, lover, hear my plea

darkness beats eternity 

lover, lover, make me cry

with the words of lullaby 

do not haunt me with my fears

i am shattered, lover, please. 

Reviews

[Neon]

I hate seeing someone as beautiful as you feel "Cry" ..
Anyway, I enjoyed the write after all it's written by an angel.

[Revery]

A poem doesn't have to be a hundred stanzas long to be good. I think short sweet and poignant are the best and this is a great example of that. 100

[Diana Dirvariu]

aw thank you!

[teardrop]

awesome writing

[Diana Dirvariu]

why thank you:)

[Everett DeValle]

Lovely...its how I feel, at times.

[Diana Dirvariu]

glad you could relate!

[Everett DeValle]

You are very welcome, Diana.