Pry

Pry

A Poem by The Analog Kid
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Returning to WC after a hiatus.

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The door gives way with a pry 
I’ve been here before
I’m making another try

© 2025 The Analog Kid


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this work could definitely be read in several different, but, perhaps because im a cynic, this one really evoked dread in me. the place i have been before is a horrible place. and yet i keep stumbling back on to it.
but the text is very clever, it gives the reader the freedom to see what they want to see.
it's a short piece, but it is full of drama and suspense. the non-revelation was very intelligent.

Posted 11 Months Ago


I like the sound in this, like a rusty hinge.

And hey I realized we can probably befriend our collective self in the other profile.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Analog Kid

11 Months Ago

Thanks! Yeah good point!!

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The Analog Kid
The Analog Kid

Allentown, PA



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Joined: Jul 5, 2008 Update: Jan 8, 2025 Seeing some of the old familiar WC poets and writers is heartening. Enough time has passed and a lot of the drama seems to have migrated to social medi.. more..