My Angel

My Angel

A Poem by dillonjensen
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For a dear friend of mine.

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She is the angel in my nightmares,
the winged seraph whom I love.

She plays my heart like a lyre,
the winged seraph whom I love.

She knows not the way I feel,
the winged seraph whom I love.

She brings peace to my chaotic mind,
the winged seraph whom I love.

She stays nestled in my heart forever,
the winged seraph whom I love.

© 2013 dillonjensen


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dillonjensen
Love is the foundation on which we build our lives.

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I love this so much, Dillon. So much thought put into this poem. You're right--love is the foundation on which we build our lives. There are peaks in our lives that love sometimes either makes us stronger or break us into small fragments of glass. Our hearts are most compared to glass, since it's fragile. Whenever it becomes broken, it takes a very long time to repair its self. Though, when we do find the right person, our heart reboots 100 percent until it's whole again. The only reason that there's so much heartache and harsh break-ups in the world is because people find the wrong people to fall in love with. If you find the right person, you will only see the bright side of love. I do think some people overuse the word. There are even little 5th graders having boyfriends and sharing those three special words. It has gotten to the point that it has lost its powerful message behind it. Sorry, I tend to ramble on and on about this topic. Haha! You done a wonderful job indeed. Your words flow perfectly and touches the heart with such bliss. :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dillonjensen

12 Years Ago

Well I certainly agree with you about the overuse! And thank you for taking the time to talk about w.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

12 Years Ago

Haha yeah of course, Dillon. This is a sweet poem and I really did enjoy reading it. :)



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This is beautiful, such sweet love. Beautifully worded.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dillonjensen

12 Years Ago

Thanks, appreciate that!
Carolann Dowsett

12 Years Ago

Welcome :)
I love this so much, Dillon. So much thought put into this poem. You're right--love is the foundation on which we build our lives. There are peaks in our lives that love sometimes either makes us stronger or break us into small fragments of glass. Our hearts are most compared to glass, since it's fragile. Whenever it becomes broken, it takes a very long time to repair its self. Though, when we do find the right person, our heart reboots 100 percent until it's whole again. The only reason that there's so much heartache and harsh break-ups in the world is because people find the wrong people to fall in love with. If you find the right person, you will only see the bright side of love. I do think some people overuse the word. There are even little 5th graders having boyfriends and sharing those three special words. It has gotten to the point that it has lost its powerful message behind it. Sorry, I tend to ramble on and on about this topic. Haha! You done a wonderful job indeed. Your words flow perfectly and touches the heart with such bliss. :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dillonjensen

12 Years Ago

Well I certainly agree with you about the overuse! And thank you for taking the time to talk about w.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

12 Years Ago

Haha yeah of course, Dillon. This is a sweet poem and I really did enjoy reading it. :)
I like this. I wish all men had a mind like yours. :)
This is going in my library

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dillonjensen

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I really appreciate that. :)
Be myself!

12 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :) Message me.

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