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 Friday, February 6, 2009 at 8:47pm | Edit Note | Delete

i'll still be here,
eyes wide open,
trying to understand
why we do what 
we do:

to each other,
to the world;
as if we've never 
felt before.

as if...
we don't
believe
anymore.


forgiveness
is not a license
for repeat offenders.

in time,
trust will die;

one day we'll 
wonder why it
seems we never
have need to cry...
as love becomes a lie.

Reviews

[heido]

"forgiveness
is not a license
for repeat offenders."

Insiteful. I'm sorry is also not guilt free absolution.

[Natalie]

I like that forgiveness is not a license for repeat offenders. Sad truth. Well done!

[Miss Coral]

Excellent thoughts on society/humanity in general. Blunt, but still written in an empathetic and somewhat sad manner.

Great emotion and wonderful rhythm- quality writing.

Nice job! :)

[karmic]

The world will always be filled with a curtain coldness. That coldness and how it affects the person, also molds that person. Belief and feeling becomes an odd law, that many have long forgotten. Nice piece.

[DiMar4u]

i fear the day that i don't hurt anymore.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is excellent

[Anicca]

I really really like this. I like its bluntness. Good job!