Standing Silently:

just a sliver

I prayed for so long

  to be gone.

I can feel it, the cold

  and what it took from

         me.

Every corner cleared,

 Every shadow inside out.

There's no pony ride,

  no broken down show;

And,

 there's no where

    "to go."

Only a fool who thought

   He could know.

Reviews

[Miss Coral]

Short, but concise, and quick, and it conveyed a lot emotionally.

I love the ending couplet. Great job :)