unnoticed

early dawn,

breathing life into the day;
yesterdays' dreams
find hope along the way.

punctuality surrenders
slowly whilst contentment
saturates my view.

i haven't the words,
or rather,
i won't give them to you-

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Wow... love the title for this write. The poetic feelings and words in this poem is really nice. Enjoyed this write a lot.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a great piece. I loved the last stanza. Thank you for sharing.

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deep intriguing read, nicely expressed, thank you for your review

[Corset]

This kinda sounds like my morning~bliss until I find the coffee pot and look at the day ahead, then it gets daunting for a bit, then it gets better again later lol...poetry time :)

[TheWriter]

That's right! Don't "give them the words", make them find it for themselves =) Experience!

[A.A.Romanczuk]

You have given us quite enough in withholding the words that you do not withhold. This is one of those golden enigmas that are really quite crystalline clear. I love it.