Autum Haiku

A Poem by Dimitri

Cold air
Her warm breath
I hurry not

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Next to a tree, under a moonless night the chilly air bothers me not as she warms my lips

© 2010 Dimitri

Author's Note

Haiku is a genre of Japanese poetry consisting on 5,7,5 syllable poems, this translates to short line, long line, short line in English, I hope you enjoy it.

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.	. beautiful poetry ... Posted 15 Years Ago . beautiful poetry ... Rating /100

Actually, what it translates to in English is 5-7-5 syllables. The Japanese form is written in 17 'moras' (or 'on'). So when written in English it should be 5-7-5.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on October 21, 2010
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Dimitri

Guadalajara, JAlisco, Mexico

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I believe that writing is the art of telling complex things with simple words. Sadly, most writing today seems to be complex words telling simple things... Love to write, love to read, I believe th.. more..