Expectations hurts

Darkness is the only thing

my eyes can see.

living in the hope

to see the brightness of the  new day

every time I try to walk,

tears roll down my face and

the hand I needed for help, they

pushed me away and I walk alone.

Reviews

[hanir]

Well written emotional piece!

[Coyote Poetry]

Fear and regret can blind us and stop us from reaching our goals. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Your words described fear and struggle.
Coyote

[Saddam]

Emotionally write.
The tittle is absolute right. Expectations hurts, no matter what is it but other side is it pushed us to do better too.
I love the theme and pen's flow.
Loved it.

[Emily]

I really like the emotion in this one!
Keep it up!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

How often we need someone to stand by us in our tough times.. but unfortunately noone understands us then apart from our family... can relate to the feelings behind this one..