The Morning After

It's Amazing what a little Jazz can do at the right time.

Waves crash along the shores, as I open the double doors revealing the ocean view but it's small time for when I look back and see the true Glorious view, the satin covers barely covering your body your side profile is shown as I slowly climb back onto the bed to kiss  your beautifully naked bits, as I make my way up your back my lips press gently on the back of your neck wishing you a good morning after, running my fingers down your body resting them on your hip, the smiles are brought to an end for the exchange of glances takes course, both seem lost but knowing exactly what to do.

The breeze blowing and the ocean crashing the sheets rubbing agaisnt our bodies as we meet each other repeatedly, me looking up at you now tower over and clenching on. My bodies tightening with every motion i dont know if I am caressing the sheets or your soft skin as i run my hands up your legs then up your sides, I pull you closer me sitting up giving you my full attention kissing your where your heart stays the sound of your breath the soft touch creates a feeling inside me that starts building up getting ready to burst.

Feeling myself wanting to be more I start to proove myself harder to you feeling your body tighten harder with me, your nails scratching,your hands digging and grabbing on for dear life I wrap my hands to hug around your waiste
hearing you sing a song a pleasure as I continue to play the tune with you.the two of us becoming 1 tight note of flesh.

I feel you releaseonly thing being grabbed is my head as you release pulling you closer as i continue after you do so, and soon lifting you up as I release myself.

Author's Note

Say what you feel, if it is to insult then move on, I don't really write for people to tell me how I can write better, I write cause I feel like writing something in a certain way.

Reviews

[Vlazuvius]

"I don't really write for people to tell me how I can write better"

Ok...but if you're going for hot & steamy, you shouldn't call people's genitals "bits". Other than that though, it was kind of hot. My wife would eat it up.