Waiting

This poem i just wrote. I have no idea why it just came to me. By the way, its not my favorite poem i have written. There is a message in this one, so see if you can find it!

        Waiting, Waiting

for dawn to turn to day,

        Waiting, Waiting,

for dawn to fade away.

        Waiting, Waiting,

her heart is filled with love,

        Waiting, Waiting,

she soon finds out, he now sits above.

        Waiting, Waiting,

her smile fades to gray,

        Waiting, Waiting,

for dawn to turn to day.

Author's Note

ignore any mistakes and please comment!

Reviews

[Carly]

yeah thats what i was going for. thanks for leaving a comment!

[Ki]

As I read this again... I really like it. There's a little bit of mystery to it.