sin

could not get this person outa my mind....

your name / on my tongue

rolls tastey / incessantly

sweet savory

delicious thoughts evoke / mental salavation

and a coy smile / of anticipation

your rough hands / contrast

my soft skin / somatic slip

into

sensual

sin.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Outstanding use of words. You said it all in so few words. I like the format and the story in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kelley]

That was cool how you wrote this Dessy!
I like the pattern you choose to present
your sin.......smiles

Great write thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Laura E. Aranda]

wooooO

LOVE IT

Delicious! This is the first piece that I have read by you and I can't wait to read the rest!
Cheers,lea

[Kelley Pascoe]

Kind of lusty, kind of romantic.Either way this was a very good poem. Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

[SweetPeachesAlways]

oooohhh, I love this...kinda sneaky, kinda sensual, kinda some kinda beautiful!

your name / on my tongue
rolls tastey / incessantly - Great lines! Love this!

Good job! Great write!