More than my attention

Writing romantic stuff rather than dark and brooding. I know. It scares me too. Anyway, I just finished this one this weekend. It's another song. I'm still fighting with it deciding what I do and don't like. Let me know what you think.

hey
i'm sure you already know
but you've got more than my attention
and i'm
powerless against you
so don't
throw me off a bridge


hey
you don't make it any easier
with your non-commital answers
and your unreadable glances
cause i
left my wits at home
and i can't make heads or tails
of all the things that you won't say


cause i'd probably do whatever you said
and when you're not around it feels like i'm dead


there's nothing
i wouldn't give
there's nothing
i wouldn't do
just to spend another minute
and stay a little longer

there are no walls i wouldn't beak
no chance i wouldn't take
just to spend another minute
and stay a little longer with you


i am
wrapped around your little finger
tied up in knots and completely defenseless
you
have complete control of everything
cause everything i am
is focused on you


cause i'd probably do whatever you told me
and maybe even some things that you don't

Reviews

[Lydia]

I really like this, it'll make a great song.

Oh, and I think waiting is the hardest part...just me though. :]

[Dee Lacy]

What a lovely pouring out of your emotions. Lucky person.