Keep a Candle

A new nursery rhyme, which poppep into my head in the night.

Keep a Candle

 

Keep a candle shining bright

On the windowsill tonight;

I’ll be home before first light,

If I keep it in my sight.

Author's Note

Initial reactions and constructive criticism welcome. This is meant to resemble a traditional nursery rhyme.

Reviews

[Ghost]

Sounds like a long lost sailor coming home and needing guidance... Such a good rhyme, keep up the writing I feel these will catch on..

[Debbie Barry]

Thanks, Ghost! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your continued encouragement.