date

this is the first peom ive writen. i was like 7 maybe

plz plz get out of my head im so weak i cant get out of bed i think and i think of you i cant even drink a bottle of mt.dew it is true that i like im wondering if you liked me too stairin stairin into space cant stop thinking about your beutiful face i cant get enough your up there in USA top prettiest stuff plain to see will you go on a date with me if you will that would be great but if you cant then go suck grapes.

Reviews

[Annie29]

Haha, thanks for the humor (:

[afra]

lol this was cute and funny

[Becky]

Hahaha. That made someone's day?

That freaking made my life.

I guess it probably wouldn't be quite as adorable if you wrote it now, but at seven...

That is the cutest. thing. ever. (except for puppies and kittens and Robert Downey Jr, etc.)

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Ikr?! Robert Disney Jr....heh heh :D

[Becky]

Robert...Disney Jr?

I'm going to assume that was autocorrect....

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Lololol auto correct *punches screen* owww...

[Becky]

Punching screens is generally to be avoided..

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Whoops :P the screens always get me. Just like those damn toddlers and the throwing them into walls...I'm weird XD

[Becky]

Really? I hadn't noticed. haha:p

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Lol :P

[Becky]

:)

[Pi Cee]

"but if you can't then go suck grapes" =) That just made my day, I swear.

[Mr.Cardigan]

im glad i could help ha

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

awesome :P i loved it

[Mr.Cardigan]

thanks