Proposing my love

A Story by Dev

"I love..."

"Stop. Close your zip first," she interrupted and left.

I looked down' "Damn!"

© 2015 Dev

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Philip Muls

Sharp and funny! That love wasn't going anywhere...

Posted 10 Years Ago

Jaspar

You're stronger than I am. Unrequited love hurts. If that's what this is about. Short and to the point. Sharpe and pointed.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 16, 2015
Last Updated on October 16, 2015

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Dev

Jamshedpur, Jharkhand, India

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Not really an author but a lover of everything related to literature. I don't believe in exquisite words but something that touches the heart. Yes, the heart, it matters! more..